RoxanneMiller : Molly's Job: Chapter 1
Link : Video
Summary :
Molly's got a job at the Breastaurant and something happened to her. She's been through a couple of sizes in the uniform and she even popped button's in a client's plate. She is called in HR Office to see what is going on and she happens to be growing and growing and growing... popping the uniform and still wondering why... perhaps it's an allergic reaction... but will Molly keep her job?
Review :
Roxanne has made quite a lot of BE videos over time. This one is different. She has developed a lot to the fetish over time and adhered to some of the core ideals of the fetish on camera. What makes this video is direction. Her early videos were all made by herself and that really limits any creativity and what can be done. To make a pov video it's pretty simple, but the fetish really requires angles and multiple edits and SFX, and slowly Roxanne has evolved to meet this. Her last videos Spiked Tea and The Special Air Spray (both reviewed here) show how far she has come and what she can do, but also her commitment of performing the fetish. This is an issue many creators have, which is a lack of knowledge and in turn how to produce it on screen.
The video itself isn't perfect but it does a hell of job. The first thing that stands out is the use of AI voices. I'm not against AI, it can be a great tool for creators, but the AI voices do fall tonally a bit flat which is jarring at times. The BE itself is not bad. A lot of effort is put into the process of her getting bigger and bigger. It's shown too much with close ups of buttons moving and i would have liked to see her shirt get tighter in more wider shots then in extreme closeups.
The SFX are good but it's a bit confusing as the mix is a bit off. The main SFX is a repeated hum (best i can think of) and the stretching growing sounds are lost in that noise. If the mix was more focused on the growth sounds that would make it easier for what that stomach growing and then the breast growth cues would be for the audience.
The plot is quite basic but the writing is great. The writer is DrEnlarge, who is a long time creator of BE stories and it's not his first entry into BE videos as he was involved in LovelyLilith's Software Upgrade videos. The writing is good and at times funny. I enjoyed the banter between the HR woman and the manager.
This video ends with a TBC ending and i look forward to a part 2. There are defiantly some things that need to be addressed and improved on, but to whats been said and done this is a good video.
On a side note, there is a free video that's interesting and worth a watch. In this video Roxanne talks about her history regarding the BE fetish and her connection to it and how she feels about it. It's honest and well a real eyeopener about how other creators may feel about the fetish. This can be found here. video
Scores
Story : 4 Story was fine but the writing really stands out and the dialogue is great.
Acting : 5 Roxanne does a good job of being shy and sheepish during the video as she gets bigger.
SFX : 4 It's a decent enough mix rather then just looping the same sounds over and over. But it could be clearer.
Process : 4 It's there but the big moments take place with extreme closeups. But it does a good job and it's the best she's done so far in her videos.
Conclusion
It's a great step in the right direction for her BE videos and it's well worth your time and money.
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